【写作任务】

假如你是一位导游，近日有来自美国的外宾团要来参观你们市，第一站参观的是鑫海动物园，请你根据以下提示提前准备要介绍的内容。

提示：

最好的地方——鑫海动物园

◆规模大(占地面积约210,000 m2)

◆动物数量多(约1000只)

◆种类丰富

注意：适当运用最高级和比较级

【思路点拨】

1. 定基调

体裁：介绍某地，属于说明文。

时态：一般现在时。

人称：介绍某地，可用第三人称。

2. 列提纲、写句子

3. 巧衔接

文中写动物种类丰富时，可以重复使用最高级，关键词的重复是一种很好的衔接手段。

4. 添佳句

It is our first stop and it will be an unforgettable stop.

它是我们参观的第一站，也将是难忘的一站。

5. 成篇章

Hello! Welcome to my town!

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At last, I hope your trip will be an enjoyable one.

参考答案

2. 列提纲、写句子

(1) the biggest and most beautiful town

(2) bigger than the other two zoos

(3) the loveliest pandas

(4) slower than other animals

(5) the most dangerous animals

5. 成篇章

Hello! Welcome to my town! It is the biggest and most beautiful town in our province. There are many good places to visit but I think the best place is Xinhai Zoo. It is our first stop and it will be an unforgettable stop.

The zoo is new and it is bigger than the other two zoos in our province. It is about 210,000 m2. The number of animals is the largest in our province. There are about 1,000 animals in total. Also the zoo has the most kinds of animals. We have the loveliest pandas, the funniest monkeys and the biggest elephants. The tortoises are slower than other animals but they are the most interesting. Do you want to see the most dangerous animals? Come and see the wildest lions and the scariest tigers.

At last, I hope your trip will be an enjoyable one.

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