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初中英语写作指导(二

第2期

【写作任务】 (Section B 3c)

假如今天英语课上你们就“habits”这个话题进行了讨论,课后老师要求你们写自己的习惯。请用英语写一篇短文介绍自己的好习惯和坏习惯完成此次写作任务。

【思路点拨】

1. 定基调

体裁:介绍自己的好习惯和坏习惯,属于说明性质的文体。

时态:介绍日常习惯时,用一般现在时。

人称:写个人习惯时,用第一人称。

2. 列提纲、写句子

3. 巧衔接

罗列好习惯和坏习惯时可用and, also等词作为列举的连接纽带,从写好习惯转到写坏习惯时可用however作为对比和转折的连接纽带。

4. 添佳句

Good habits will benefit people forever.

好习惯使人终生受益。

Old habits die hard, so I'll start changing before it's too late! 旧习难改,因此我会尽早改。

5. 成篇章

Everyone has his own habits. Here are my good habits and bad habits.

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参考答案

2. 列提纲、写句子

(1) often help with housework

(2) always finish my homework by myself

(3) eat fruit and vegetables every day

(4) go to the dentist

(5) never arrive late for school / am never late for school

(7) often use the Internet

(8) three to five times a week

(9) I hardly ever exercise / play sports

5. 成篇章

Everyone has his own habits. Here are my good habits and bad habits.

I have a lot of good habits. I often help with housework and I always finish my homework by myself. I eat fruit and vegetables every day. Also, I go to the dentist for teeth cleaning twice a year. I never arrive late for school. Good habits will benefit people forever. However, I have some bad habits too. I never do some reading. I often use the Internet deep into the night. And I eat junk food three to five times a week. Also I hardly ever exercise. Old habits die hard, so I’ll start changing before it’s too late!

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